Write about your favorite animal

Write an essay of 120 words about your favorite animal.

What do you like about it?

Note:

Write one line to introduce yourself.

The deadline is the 9^th of November 2015.

Comments

[ceciliamercante]

Good morning Bear,

You did a pretty good job

Read the corrections.

Have a good day

Cecilia Mercante



My name’s REM Bear.

I’m second year student at ITC.

1- I am A second year student...



My family is farm, so I lived and grew up with a lot of animals.

2-my parents are farmers...



There are cows, dogs, etc. I very liked them.

A type of them I preferred cows

3- cows are my favorite.



. Because I spent a lot time with them as I brought them to field looked them.

4-...To the field and looked after them.



Sometimes I went to field with friends and sometimes I went to alone to look after my cows.

In occupation I could make a lot of friends, and played game with my friends on the field, but I always didn’t win them.

5-Can you reformulate that sentence please?



Anyways, the cows they helped my family when rainy season and drying season (to plan and bring the rice).

6- Anyways, (comma) cows helped my family during the rainy season...



Since they could make me to have a lot of souvenirs with my friends and helped my family, too. So I very loved them.

7-Because I have a lot of memories with them, I love them .

[REM Bear]

​​​​​​​​My name’s REM Bear. I’m second year student at ITC. My family is farm, so I lived and grew up with a lot of animals. There are cows, dogs, etc. I very liked them.

A type of them I preferred cows. Because I spent a lot time with them as I brought them to field looked them. Sometimes I went to field with friends and sometimes I went to alone to look after my cows. In occupation I could make a lot of friends, and played game with my friends on the field, but I always didn’t win them. Anyways, the cows they helped my family when rainy season and drying season (to plan and bring the rice).

Since they could make me to have a lot of souvenirs with my friends and helped my family, too. So I very loved them.

[Ham Theavy]

Dear Teacher,

My name is HAM Theavy. I’m a second year student at Royal University of Phnom Penh. I come from Banteay Meanchey province.

My favorite animal is cat and dog. In my house there are a dog and a cat. The dog is so big. It has black fur and beautiful eyes. The cat is smaller than dog. It has white, black and yellow fur. They are beautiful body, gentle and lovely. They are really clever. When someone visited my house, they remember them. One more, they always protect my house from thief and stranger. They like playing with each other and especially, they never bite each other. When my house has many mouse. The cat always catches it. It likes playing with me. I really love them. When I have free time, I always play them with my sister. It makes me happy when I play them. So I like the dog and the cat. I'm very interested the you give me write about my favorite animal. Thanks

[CHIN Sophanit]

Dear Teacher!

My name is CHIN Sophanit. I'm a second year student at Royal University of law and Economics. My major is Bank and Finance. I'm going to write about my favorite animal.

In the world there are many kind and different animal. I like all animal but my best

favorite animal is Bear. I really like it because it is the big animal and clever.

It looks so cute and beautiful. The bear always like forest and lives there. The bear

is so important for us. If we protect the bear we can earn money from it and anther

animal such as make a zoo. When we make a zoo people can earn money and get a job

from tourism that came to see the animal. so i really like it and i think all of you

like the bear the same me. One more think i want to protect all animal to live in the

earth forever. Thank you for give me to write my favorite animal.

[YER Hillymas]

Dear teacher( English Intermediate level student)

About favorite animal

Hello! Teacher. My mane is YER Hillymas. I'm 20 years old. I come from Battambang province. I'm a second year student. I'm studying at Royal University Of Phnom Penh. My major is Khmer Literature.

People are favorite different things such as flower, nature, jewelry, animal and other things. Animal is the part of people life. Every house, they feed their favorite animals like dog, cat, cow or bird. In my house also has dog. Why? Because it's nice. When the dog is small, it face is cute and I want to play with it every day. By the way, it fur is soft. I want to touch it again and again. On the other hand, it's friendly. When I come back home, it always waits me, but not all the people. If it sees difference people who it has never seen before, it well bark and tries to bite them. Furthermore, it's very honest to own. Sometimes, when it barks at night, it wants to tell us that has something wrong. Besides, it eats everything which I put to it. It's smart and I clean it every day because all my favorite animals which I feed, I always take care for them. One more thing, it always runs following me when I go to school or somewhere. In conclusion, I really like my dog because it always plays with me and make me happy. So my house feeds many dogs.

From

YER Hillymas